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Subway ad for cookware, quoting a 5 star review saying "Cookware So Good I Was Called a Liar."

Wednesday (2/5): WordPress Training + Beginning Portfolios

Subway ad for cookware, quoting a 5 star review saying "Cookware So Good I Was Called a Liar."

Writing Into the Day (15 min):

Please analyze this ad rhetorically, using whatever previous rhetorical knowledge you have, plus what we have read about together. If you don’t have any previous rhetorical knowledge, that’s okay!

Some guiding questions:

What argument(s) is the ad making?
Who seems to be the intended audience?
What strategies are they using to convince the audience?
Do you think the data presented is reliable? Why or why not?
Do you think the ad is effective? Why or why not?
How does this compare to the Brooklinen ad from Monday?

Discussion

Agenda:

  1. Making Commons accounts + joining Course Group/Site
  2. Signing up for Spring Start Workshops
  3. Discussing portfolio + looking at examples
  4. Creating own portfolio skeletons
  5. Our first posts! (Group work + WordPress Practice)

Links for Commons:

Register for an Account
Course Group

Links for Spring Start:

Descriptions of Workshops
Sign-Up Link

Portfolio Instructions and Examples:

I haven’t revised my full portfolio instructions from last year yet, but there are 8 required assignments that the English department mandates you include in your portfolios.
I will also ask you to write a few other short reflections on your work in the course and include them in your portfolio. If you do not complete any of the required assignments, you will receive a 0 for that assignment AND not earn those points on the portfolio rubric, so the Big 8 are especially important!!

You will be making your own CUNY Commons sites for your portfolios, which will give you experience using WordPress– the platform that powers almost a third of the entire Internet!

Here are some examples of student portfolios from last semester:

America’s Portfolio
Elidhet’s Portfolio
Lised’s Portfolio

Each student designed and organized their portfolio in different ways, but all of them did a great job!

Instructions for First Posts:

As a group, choose a piece of media (written, visual, video, music, some combination) that you think is particularly powerful, emotionally moving, or intellectually persuasive. Then write a post together (using any one group member’s Commons account) on our site summarizing the piece of media and explaining what specific features help make it so effective. (This can just be a paragraph)

As you write your post, make sure you:

  • Title the post
  • Credit all group members in the post
  • Select appropriate Categories for your post (“Posts” and “Student Posts”)
  • Add any appropriate Tags to your post (your choice)
  • Add any relevant Links (if any)
  • If your chosen piece of media is something you can Embed (in addition to providing a link), use the Add Media and/or Add Document feature. If it is a YouTube video, find and paste in YouTube’s Embed HTML Code.
  • Use the “Preview” feature to double check your post looks how you want it to look
  • Click the blue “publish” button when you’re done!

Looking Ahead:

Monday: Beginning Paper 1 (Creative Nonfiction– This I No Longer Believe)

Readings Due:
“Weapons of Math Destruction Chapter 1” (PDF)
“The Data Driven Life” (link)

Assignments Due: None!

 

Subway ad for Brooklinen

Monday 2/3: Principles of Academic Writing

Subway ad for Brooklinen

Writing Into the Day (15 min):

Please analyze this ad rhetorically, using whatever previous rhetorical knowledge you have, plus what we have read about together. If you don’t have any previous rhetorical knowledge, that’s okay!

Some guiding questions:

What argument(s) is Brooklinen making?
Who seems to be the intended audience?
What strategies are they using to convince the audience?
Do you think the data presented is reliable? Why or why not?
Do you think the ad is effective? Why or why not?

Discussion

 Outline:

  • Bandwagon + Namecalling
  • The Academic Rhetorical Situation
    • How to sound professional
    • Formal
    • Scientific
    • “Opposite of how you speak” — no slang
    • Speech is casual, we don’t want to sound that way
    • We won’t be taken seriously
    • Job interviews, business professionals
    • You want your point to be trusted/well-received
    • Professors!!!
    • Students + colleagues
  • General Rules for Formal Academic Writing
    • Use citations
    • No contractions
    • Structure– clear, ordering your ideas in an intentional way
    • Introduction, Conclusion
    • Formal tone, no slang
    • An academic formatting style (MLA, APA, etc.)
    • Third person (no first person, no second person)
    • Works cited/bibliography
    • Grammar + punctuation— “appropriate”
    • adding too many commas
    • Run on sentence (don’t)
    • Passive voice

I added 8 ml of water to the beaker

The researcher added 8ml of water to the beaker

One should add 8ml of water to the beaker

 Looking Ahead:

**Meet in Computer Lab 7.68 for WordPress Training + Portfolio Discussion**

Readings Due Wednesday: None!

Assignments Due Wednesday: Bandwagon and Namecalling Examples (comment on blog post)

 

Wednesday 1/29: Introduction to Major Concepts

**Please grab your name tent from the table by the door**

**If you were not here on Monday, please grab a piece of paper to make a name tent and a copy of the course schedule**

Writing Into the Day (10 min)

When has a piece of writing, either something you wrote or something you read, made a significant impact on your life? What qualities or context made that piece of writing so significant?

Sharing (5 min)

Overview:

  • What is Rhetoric?
  • Introducing Rhetorical Devices Assignment
  • What are WMDs? Why are they important?
  • Questions we have about either topic
  • Previewing next week

What is Rhetoric?

  • Collective brainstorm of prior associations/meanings
    • tool to help you write an essay
    • a way to get your point across
    • a way to make your speech better, better = more informative and not boring
    • a way to reach your audience
    • to make an emotional connection with the audience
    • to persuade somebody
    • “empty rhetoric”
  • Main ideas from the reading
    • Writing is not an inherent talent– it is a skill that can be studied/learned/improved through rhetoric
  • 4 Purposes of Rhetoric
    • To persuade
      • Having a strong argument– running for office, being a lawyer
      • Bring up/address counter arguments
      • Use quotes that are relevant — on topic, accurate, who is it from?
    • To inform
      • Enunciate, be clear
      • Use facts, back up your opinions with evidence
      • Having data (reliable data!)
      • Use simple/easy to understand language
      • The news
      • Teaching! Student presenting on topic (teaching!)
    • To express
      • Getting your ideas to shine, have your ideas stand out, stick with people
      • Know your situation– use appropriate tone
      • Use emotions and details– emphasize the important parts
      • Be respectful– or deliberately disrespectful
      • Giving personal examples (either from yourself or from someone else)
      • Giving a eulogy– you’re not trying to persuade people that the person was good/bad, you’re just talking about their life
    • To entertain
      • To not be offensive (or to be deliberately offensive)
      • Turn dark humor into comedy
      • Choose your level of seriousness appropriately
      • Volume
      • Tone
      • Variety
      • Comedic timing
      • Read your audience– what kinds of things are they entertained by?
      • To invoke emotion
      • Fiction more often than nonfiction — build suspense
      • Keeping audience’s attention– cliffhangers, surprises, plot twists, dynamicness,
      • Know when to stop
      • Hanging out with your friends
  • Work together in pairs to come up with general rhetorical rules for each Purpose of Rhetoric
  • Then also come up with some situations in which each purpose might be useful/important

Sharing/Compiling

Discussing Rhetorical Devices Assignment

What Are WMDs?

  • Share out main ideas from the TED Talk
    • The way they grade teachers– the algorithm doesn’t actually measure whether someone is a good teacher, and people are losing their jobs because of it
    • We are being scored by secret formulas
    • Different people get different sentences for the same/similar crimes because of the algorithm used to determine sentences
    • Algorithms are never going to be fair if we don’t make them fair
      • Question them
      • Algorithmic audit– check the data, check the definition of success that is programmed into the algorithm
      • Who does it fail?
      • Be open to feedback, always work to improve the algorithm
    • Consider longterm effects
    • Algorithms can be used to reinforce segregation
      • Prison algorithms are racially biased
      • Different policing of different areas
      • Where is the data coming from????
    • Data scientists should be translators of ethical conversations that happen in the world
      • Data scientists should explain to others when we can trust data and for what
      • Most people are mystified by statistics!
  • Create beginning working definitions
  • When do we already know we encounter algorithms in our day to day lives?
  • Preview Table of Contents from the book

Questions? (either to answer now or to be thinking about /discussing in the future)

If We Have Leftover Time: How do we want to do political issues this semester?

Previewing Next Week:

Monday (2/3): Introduction to Propaganda + Principles of Academic Writing

Readings Due:

“Propaganda is Everywhere”

“Name Calling”

Bandwagon Illustration

Bandwagon Description

Assignments Due:

None!

Wednesday (2/5): WordPress Training and Portfolio Discussion

 Meet in 7th Floor Computer Lab (NB 7.68)

Readings Due:

None!

Assignments Due:

Your first rhetorical devices assignment! Post examples + analysis of the “namecalling” and “bandwagon” techniques as comments on the blog.

Monday (1/27): Introductions to Each Other and the Course

Bitmoji of Olivia waving and holding a backpack, with a chalkboard that says "Back to School!"

Each day, either shortly before class or shortly after, I will post the lesson plan for the class period here. This way, you will be able to catch up on anything you miss due to being absent or late, and review what we’ve discussed. You can also use these posts to access any links we use during class.

Writing into the Day (10 mins)

On a piece of paper or an electronic device, please freewrite on the following:

  1. What information do you want to know in order to plan for success in this course?
  2. What questions do you have about this class?
  3. What are your existing strengths as a writer?
  4. What areas would you like to grow in this semester?

Today’s Outline:

  • Overview Prezi
  • Introducing ourselves
  • Answering our questions (#1 and #2)
  • Course site/syllabus/course calendar
  • Previewing next week

Introductions

  • Your name/pronouns
  • Your major and/or interests
  • A fact about you that isn’t true about anyone else in the room

Sharing Responses to WitD (5 min)

Syllabus (Up to last 15 minutes)

  • Course group and site
  • Walk/talk through syllabus
  • Summarize course calendar

For Wednesday: